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Wednesday 26 August 2020

Amazing Speech 2020!

 Hi Readers! Today I'll be showing you my speech. My speech is about if I was Prime minister for a day I would be a good person. I have written 525 words well I think my speech is really convincing. The 3 main facts I did was help poor people, teamwork and be kind to everyone. My time of my speech was 3 minutes and 9 seconds but I only needed to do 2 minutes. It took about 3 days to plan it and 2 days to write my speech. 

At first when we were learning about we learnt that eye contact and personal pronouns are really in speeches. Personal pronouns are a way do describe you and other people for example I, our and us but there are much more than those three. 

I have written 5 paragraphs in my speech they are my introduction, my 3 main facts and my conclusion.  I'm am feeling nervous for presenting my speech because I have to read it to the class or the whole school.

We do speeches to test our knowledge and to see who is the best at writing persuasively . And who has actually been learning and who has not. At the start when we were planning our speeches the teachers gave us some ideas for our speech so we don't have to spend so much time looking for a good speech topic. Here's a little bit of my speech.

Introduction: Hi, What would you do if you were prime minister for a day? I am certain that everyone is going to work together, right. Another way of saying working together is teamwork.

         Conclusion:  So as you can see, you should be a good person when you are Prime Minister.I would allow the amazing students to do whatever they want well, adults too.Thank you for listening to my speech.

Hope you like my blog post!

What would your speech be about if you wrote a speech?

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1 comment:

  1. Hi Sahil im Sam. what a great blog post you have done i really like it. I like the introduction and conclusion for your speech. Maybe you could put a bit more of your speech. Did you like making the speech?

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