Hi Everyone! Today I'll be doing Summer Learning Journey about Barack Obama was the first African American President of the United States of America (USA).
Barack Obama was born in Hawaii. He went to university to study laws. he is 58 years old.
Barack and his wife, Michelle have spent heaps of time giving back to their community. Their favorite things are spending time with their family, playing with their dog, or going to the gym workout in the and exercise to get fit.
Now the Summer Learning Journey site told write three things you like doing. The three things I like doing are doing the Summer Learning Journey, playing games and watching games and I like playing football.
Hope you like my blog post!
Whats your three favorite things you like doing?
Please leave me a comment :)
Kia Ora Sahil!
ReplyDeleteIt's me Nadia here again to comment on another one of your epic posts for the SLJ. Congratulations on another great post!
Good job at finding some interesting information about Barack Obama, I didn't know he was 58 years old.
Three things that I like to do is sing, read and learn new things. I see you like to play football, do you have a favourite team?
Next time, do you think you could include links to show where you got your information from. This is just so no one thinks that you plagiarized (stole) someone elses work. I think some photos might also draw more readers to your blog. Just make sure that you include a link to the source of the photos and to use labelled for reuse photos.
Great job with this post Sahil,
I hope to see a reply or two from you, keep up the great work,
Until next time
- Nadia :)
Hi Nadia!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog.
I liked how you said you like to sing, try out new things and read. my favorite football team is Juventus cause Ronaldo is in it. Next time you can maybe add in a better question. From Sahil!
Hi Sahil,
DeleteThanks for the feedback!
My cousins really like Juventus, they're really big football fans.
What do you like so much about football?
- Nadia :)
Hey Sahil!
ReplyDeleteMe again, well done on another fantastic blog post!
Wow, I didn't know Barack Obama was born in Hawaii - you've included some excellent information here, awesome work. I haven't looked too much into Barack or Michelle Obama if I'm being honest, but they seem like very kind giving people!
You play football? So do I! Such a fun sport. Three things I like doing are listening to music and playing instruments (piano, guitar and bass), drawing and watching stand-up :)
Hey if you want to improve your posts even more, try adding some photos! Remember to add a link to the original source if you do. Adding photos makes people clicking on your posts more likely!
Amazing work Sahil, your blog posts are exceptional. Have an awesome night, and I hope to here from you soon - remember, the more comments you reply to, the more points :)
- Natasha